Review Detail of LordSputnik in The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 1 season

First of all, I want to express my gratitude to the reviewer for his time spent reading my work and his honest look at the novel. I wrote more than once, there are three types of novels. 1st — good text, smooth form, easy to read, good English, but the content is specific, narrowly focused and sometimes even without much sense. 2nd - hard to read, English has grammatical errors, writing style, spelling, syntax needs to be fixed. But the content is very interesting, detailed, it can be used to acquire new knowledge. 3rd is a masterpiece when both the text and the content are magnificent. But usually this is typical for real writers publishing books on paper information carriers, at the level of Ursula Le Guin, Astrid Lingrend, Mark Twain, that is, by and large, classics of world literature. Although they rarely come across among the authors of visual or web short stories, novels, light novels. This indicates the skill of the authors of their great horizons and good English, or the presence of excellent editors and proofreaders. My novel is of the second type. I have English, this is the third language, spoken is still relatively good, but written is poor. But as novels are written, he improves a little. The wall of the text was given for a reason, it is information for reflection, and not just dialogs ... well, anyway, as an author, I am grateful to the reviewer for his honest look. There is still work to do and fix bugs in the future. Thanks for such a wonderful review. respectfully