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MrBadWithNames_
MrBadWithNames_Lv25yr
2019-12-08 03:06

Overall, great story - I have to say the idea is unique, in and of itself a few lads going out in search of treasure is on of the most classic plot ideas - but I've noticed a surprising lack of such fictions on webnovel. There is a lot of good detail in there about the character motivations, goals and what makes them who they are. The characters are believable and the whole seeing is believable, actually. My only complains are a few grammatical issues (nothing major) and the overuse of commas - that said the story (while pretty short at the moment) is good, don't be discouraged because it's not getting as much attention as your everyday isekai power-fantasy because these kinds of stories usually have a "longer fuse" :)

The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 1 season

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4.5
120 Chs

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Asmita_Mukherjee
Asmita_MukherjeeLv4

I love it! I love it! The explanatory part was enough to make me add it in the library. Maybe, the author should become a historian. 馃憤馃憤馃憤 Keep up the good work!! 馃槑馃グ馃槉

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Adeile
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OH M G!!!!!!!! I freaking love it! The story is quite interesting and I love it....I love it all that you author for making this beautiful novel! This is the success of being Author!鉂わ笍

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Daisy_T
Daisy_TLv4

This is just awesome! Really wish I found such a good book before it was completed so I can shamelessly ask for more chapters馃槀... It's a lovely book guys....a must recommend for your library馃挏馃槉

4yr
SmilingBlueWolf
SmilingBlueWolfLv3

This novel is about exploring, finding treasures, and human interaction. The most important thing in a novel is to be interesting, everything else can be fixed. This one is interesting and informative inside the genre. If you like exploring and treasures, you will have fun. That aside, there's a lot of room for improvement, especially regarding style and grammar.

4yr
Arkinslize
ArkinslizeLv13

My review is only concerning the 1st chapter. The premise is good, you know your stuff. I wouldn't be able to point incoherences as i know nothing about the things you wrote. I will read a bit more tomorrow to sed how it turns out. I would maybe advice you to be careful with info dumps as it could bore some readers. I have the same issue and i think it is necessary to find a balance. Indeee, your main problem is grammar. You did your best, i can see it, but some sentences have serious problems. I could show you some examples on discord if you wish. Most grammar mistakes aren't an issue, but some sentences' syntax affect the undersdanting and the flow. The free version of Grammarly is enough to fix many of your mistakes and wrong word usage. An astuce i use to avoid some mistakes: Writing my sentences with quotation marks on Google. If there is no answer, there is probably a mistake somewhere.

4yr
JenzalexSnail
JenzalexSnailLv13

Crafted with precision. To be precise is super hard and this novel is in the context of precise. Lots of intense study pounded into one. Information by information laid bare before your eyes as you flip through the pages. A hidden gem I may say, with a twist of romance. The desire to get wealthy had turned Dara into a history maniac; which is good because he gathers lots of knowledge from his passion and most people don't or have not achieve that knowledge yet. As he ventures into long forgotten history to search for treasures to be rich and readers get to follow him in his adventures while gathers information for the hungry mind. *This reminds me of the movies, The Jones and The Mummy. If you like the movies that I mentioned then, this is another novel in a different versions and different setting. It's interesting!

4yr
peerlessRicamae
peerlessRicamaeLv5

Nice story with interisting plot. The english is excellent too. Easy to read. Keep up the good work. Waiting for more updates in the future. Good luck.

5yr
ImperatorMarshall
ImperatorMarshallLv13

Instead of your regular treasures coming to you, you are in the quest of searching for the treasure. No supernatural powers or anything but fun and adventurous tale of a person in hopes of finding the treasure.

5yr
Arba
ArbaLv13

I don't really know what to write. Sorry. Everything confuses me. Maybe this genre is just not for me. The story flow was good but it seemed rushed. Or is it because there's a lot of data that need to be presented for the readers to actually be immersed in the treasure hunt. Still, a good book of treasure hunting and history.

5yr
ShikadaAki
ShikadaAkiLv14

The story is well written, the characters have depth, I am liking the plot so far (I've reached chapter 10), the fact that the story has somewhat realism is pleasing and original to my point of view.

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