Review Detail of Ike801 in My Secret Lovelife

So, I rarely do review swaps, so let's hope it ends up well. With that, lets' start this dandy review! To start, I only read the first 12 chapters, but it's pretty interesting so far. The updates are great, since it's completed lmao, and the characters are pretty interesting so far. The writing quality could be better, but I am a native English speaker, so I'm pretty biased in that regard. I could still understand what you were trying to say, so that's basically the criteria I'm giving you. The only other critique is that the beginning is very rough, with sometimes the chapters being one long paragraph. It gets better, but some editing would be nice, since you're working on another book I believe. Overall, it's a good story, and I'll probably read more!