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    Stardust_Lyrics1mth
    Replied to Karen_Carson_5265

    Hope you enjoy reading it☺🌸!

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics1mth
    Replied to MissChelie2714

    Continue to read if you feel like it :).Actually here is the part where Sonnet is narrating in the present and comparing it with the past. Earlier, Sonnet was narrating how she first met Sky and started their talks in name of lab partners. They had their interactions like normal friends and as lab partners regarding notes. Soon she developed feelings but something happened between them that created anomaly in their daily interactions and no matter what they couldn't go back to the carefree time before where they spent their time casually like friends. Hope it helps :) .

    Ch 4 Then and Now: part 2
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    Stardust_Lyrics1mth
    Replied to Christine_Karanja_8022

    Continue to read if you feel like it :). Actually here is the part Sonnet is narrating in the present. Previously, Sonnet was talking about how she met Sky who is her crush now. It started as a normal way friends or lab partners interact regarding stuffs and notes but something happened between them that caused a bit anomaly in their daily interactions. Hope this helps ;)

    Ch 3 Then and Now
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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics2mth
    Replied to DaoistF2mGbj

    Nope, It isn't real. It's fiction. But some of the characters are inspired from the real world. Especially Lacy and Henry they are inspired from real characters😅☺

    Ch 140 Extra: Double Date
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    Stardust_Lyrics2mth
    Replied to DaoistF2mGbj

    Thank u so much for reading and loving it☺🌺🌷

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    Stardust_Lyrics2mth
    Replied to Precious_Nnamani

    Thank you so much for reading and loving it☺

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Replied to khanfiza

    thank you so much reading and loving it till the end💜💗☺

    Ch 141 Short 1: Affections across Distance
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    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Replied to Precious_Nnamani

    Thank you so much reading and liking it until the end🌸🌹🌝

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Replied to Orla_love

    Thank u for loving the story😍🌹

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Replied to Adimoha_Adaobi

    Thank you so much for supporting and loving the work🌹☺

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Replied to Akanksha_gaur

    A***... Thank you so much for reading and liking it❤😊

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics3mth
    Replied to Daoistdgk3gz

    I am delighted to know that you loved it☺. It's a fiction but some of the characters are inspired from real life people close to me🤭.

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics4mth
    Posted

    This book is absolutely recommended for those who love sci-fi and super hero stuffs. The details of the Galaxy and the new planet is just WoW. The descriptions of the missions and the fact that the MC is responsible and mature enough despite his age is something great I find here. Well, I won't spoil the new readers more. Read more to find out 😄. As for the grammar, there are very few typos and mistakes. Some tenses needs correction and and punctuations are missing. But I would highly recommend to edit the first and the second chapter. I have given the details in the comments of those chapters. Apart from that, the story concept itself is great. I would love to learn more as the unfolds. Totally worth it and with a new interesting plot. I have already added your book to my library (^^).

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    Stardust_Lyrics4mth
    Commented

    Cool Sci fi stuff here 🤠

    Ch 2 A new world
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    Commented

    The Chapter is really nice. I would like to suggest the use " " For the dialogues. Few punctuations are missing here and there. And try to break the paragraphs into further shorter ones. Most of the readers of WN read from mobile so big paragraphs appear as big chunks of text. I had faced problems for that before. So, try to separate that. Edit the first chapter. ^^ Overall the chapter is quite intriguing. Descriptions are vivid and MC's character was on spot from the beginning. Loved the chapter.

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    Replied to CKM_Manga_World

    Thank you so much. ☺

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    Stardust_Lyrics4mth
    Replied to CKM_Manga_World

    Thank you so much. ☺

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  • Stardust_Lyrics
    Stardust_Lyrics4mth
    Replied to CKM_Manga_World

    Oh. I meant the Demon Lord part 😅

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    Stardust_Lyrics4mth
    Posted

    Absolutely recommended for those who love Gore content, especially those Demonic and other supernatural powers. It's exciting and thrilling at the same time. Imagination about the scenes and the features are beautiful. The MC's life turns upside down in a flash. Well I won't spoil other readers. Read yourself to find out. But I would highly recommend to edit the chaps. There are lot of errors and typos especially missing punctuations which somehow heeds attention. Being a beginner it's a problem to deal with that. Storyline and background is still developing and the MC as well. Interesting plot still needs improvement in dialogues. I'm in initial chapters but I can see it has a very promising plot. Keep improving and keep writing. Have already added your book to my library.☺

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