What can I say? Wow, nice story overall. The mystery and hidden secrets starts from the start, leaving readers wanting more. Its a nice touch of hmm rebirth or reincarnation, haven't read so far but from the little I have read, this is nice. Little or no typo error. Author's world background, character design and all are good. It is a nice recommended fantasy book. My only thoughts, try and edit your first 2 chaps. Specify the POV and I think all I set. Good work author.
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LIKEStardust_Lyrics:Thanks a lot for taking your time reviewing it. I will re-edit the chapters defining the pov
Stardust_Lyrics:Thanks a lot for taking your time reviewing it. I will re-edit the chapters defining the pov
Stardust_Lyrics:Thanks a lot for taking your time reviewing it. I will re-edit the chapters defining the pov