This story is off to a beautiful start too often do I see mc’s with a good all around personality when we all know just how dark humanity truly is I’m genuinely excited to see which direction you take this Story but keep it classy and stay with the gore that **** is lovely 10/10
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LIKEYour review is misleading. Everyone, 1. The MC is a bastard. 2. The MC is narcissistic. 3. The MC is too OP. 4. The MC is disgusting in that he takes killing as his ultimate orgasm. For people that like that, keep on reading. For people that don't like it, avoid this novel. Oh, & for the response to the main reviewer, we know how 'dark' humans can be, but we also know that they could be good, so wake up. Similar to how often you see 'good people' I see even more 'evil people', so I hope that you edit your review to be more accurate. It's really easy to do evil but really really hard to be good, especially in a dark world. Ah, how much you have raised my hopes only to crush them.
& nah, it's not the words that are misleading, it's the lack of commas and full stops. It makes me feel like you're an english newbie which results in me thinking that you meant to say 'it's not too often' when you really meant to say ' it's too often'. I suggest replacing 'too often' with 'always' or replace the sentence directly with 'too many mcs are a bunch of goody two-shoes'.
Guest199:Your review is misleading. Everyone, 1. The MC is a bastard. 2. The MC is narcissistic. 3. The MC is too OP. 4. The MC is disgusting in that he takes killing as his ultimate orgasm. For people that like that, keep on reading. For people that don't like it, avoid this novel. Oh, & for the response to the main reviewer, we know how 'dark' humans can be, but we also know that they could be good, so wake up. Similar to how often you see 'good people' I see even more 'evil people', so I hope that you edit your review to be more accurate. It's really easy to do evil but really really hard to be good, especially in a dark world. Ah, how much you have raised my hopes only to crush them.
& nah, it's not the words that are misleading, it's the lack of commas and full stops. It makes me feel like you're an english newbie which results in me thinking that you meant to say 'it's not too often' when you really meant to say ' it's too often'. I suggest replacing 'too often' with 'always' or replace the sentence directly with 'too many mcs are a bunch of goody two-shoes'.
Guest199:Your review is misleading. Everyone, 1. The MC is a bastard. 2. The MC is narcissistic. 3. The MC is too OP. 4. The MC is disgusting in that he takes killing as his ultimate orgasm. For people that like that, keep on reading. For people that don't like it, avoid this novel. Oh, & for the response to the main reviewer, we know how 'dark' humans can be, but we also know that they could be good, so wake up. Similar to how often you see 'good people' I see even more 'evil people', so I hope that you edit your review to be more accurate. It's really easy to do evil but really really hard to be good, especially in a dark world. Ah, how much you have raised my hopes only to crush them.
Lmao and saying that people can be good ? I’d love to see an example of a human that does good simply for the sake of doing good because that definitely doesn’t exist everyone does something for a reason the only people pure hearted enough to not be rotten is children you sound like somebody with a hero complex lol
I’ve never heard of anyone doing good simply for the sake of doing good and take pleasure in killing? It’s clear that he doesn’t he simply isn’t affected by he usually inner conflict that would happen you obviously haven’t read the beginning of the story or you’d know that the Mac has already led a life of misfortune and had to kill before so why would he suddenly want to be a super hero and be good ? Lmao I’d love to hear about even one person in such a position of power that didn’t enjoy it
Guest199:& nah, it's not the words that are misleading, it's the lack of commas and full stops. It makes me feel like you're an english newbie which results in me thinking that you meant to say 'it's not too often' when you really meant to say ' it's too often'. I suggest replacing 'too often' with 'always' or replace the sentence directly with 'too many mcs are a bunch of goody two-shoes'.
And correcting my grammar ? Your obviously triggered by what I said lmao if you genuinely give a **** about the grammar of everyone’s comments the. You should probably just kill your self I recommend a good hanging or maybe shooting your self in the face would be best
Guest199:& nah, it's not the words that are misleading, it's the lack of commas and full stops. It makes me feel like you're an english newbie which results in me thinking that you meant to say 'it's not too often' when you really meant to say ' it's too often'. I suggest replacing 'too often' with 'always' or replace the sentence directly with 'too many mcs are a bunch of goody two-shoes'.
1. Good people are everywhere, you are either staying at home too often or too afraid to meet people, go out. If you're disappointed by the bullying in high schools, then you should even more go out. You see, the reason you got bullied is most probably because you don't have friends + your sorry excuse of a personality. 2. I read the novel for the sake of your review, which mislead me to believe that the mc is 'good' in a 'bad' place, and I got disappointed by what I saw in the MC which I mentioned in the previous comment.(speaking about 'good & bad' like this so you could understand.) 3. Triggered? The one triggered is obvious to both you and me, you look dumb.
Kenric_Brown:Lmao and saying that people can be good ? I’d love to see an example of a human that does good simply for the sake of doing good because that definitely doesn’t exist everyone does something for a reason the only people pure hearted enough to not be rotten is children you sound like somebody with a hero complex lol
I’m a whole ass college student and I go out every weekend honestly I didnt even get past your first sentence but I hope you your family and your children drown in a locked car
Guest199:1. Good people are everywhere, you are either staying at home too often or too afraid to meet people, go out. If you're disappointed by the bullying in high schools, then you should even more go out. You see, the reason you got bullied is most probably because you don't have friends + your sorry excuse of a personality. 2. I read the novel for the sake of your review, which mislead me to believe that the mc is 'good' in a 'bad' place, and I got disappointed by what I saw in the MC which I mentioned in the previous comment.(speaking about 'good & bad' like this so you could understand.) 3. Triggered? The one triggered is obvious to both you and me, you look dumb.
No denies about you not having friends or meeting people, sad life huh? It's fine, you could always ask your neighbor to help you. Make sure that you take a bath though, I can smell your stink from across the screen.
Kenric_Brown:I’m a whole ass college student and I go out every weekend honestly I didnt even get past your first sentence but I hope you your family and your children drown in a locked car
Notice how you attempted to be the bigger person and look down on me and then I need up eye level with me talking **** along side me lmao I love it when people prove my points for me your such a dumb ass you should’ve been aborted
Guest199:No denies about you not having friends or meeting people, sad life huh? It's fine, you could always ask your neighbor to help you. Make sure that you take a bath though, I can smell your stink from across the screen.
Guest199:1. Good people are everywhere, you are either staying at home too often or too afraid to meet people, go out. If you're disappointed by the bullying in high schools, then you should even more go out. You see, the reason you got bullied is most probably because you don't have friends + your sorry excuse of a personality. 2. I read the novel for the sake of your review, which mislead me to believe that the mc is 'good' in a 'bad' place, and I got disappointed by what I saw in the MC which I mentioned in the previous comment.(speaking about 'good & bad' like this so you could understand.) 3. Triggered? The one triggered is obvious to both you and me, you look dumb.
I look down on you because you're such a failure with no personality even when you got to college. Smh. If it's not a lie even though I'm 90% sure it is, I hope they teach you something before you end up in the sewers. Wait, too late.
Kenric_Brown:Notice how you attempted to be the bigger person and look down on me and then I need up eye level with me talking **** along side me lmao I love it when people prove my points for me your such a dumb ass you should’ve been aborted
Guest199:& nah, it's not the words that are misleading, it's the lack of commas and full stops. It makes me feel like you're an english newbie which results in me thinking that you meant to say 'it's not too often' when you really meant to say ' it's too often'. I suggest replacing 'too often' with 'always' or replace the sentence directly with 'too many mcs are a bunch of goody two-shoes'.