Review Detail of Aaron313 in Ultimate Fruit

this is me giving an honest review. I'm going to be fair and not just say harsh things but the few small good things as well. the story in the beginning was good, a fresh and original way to wake up and find yourself in one piece ( though afterwards the way the OC tried to help out the straw hats even though he knew he was normal and had no powers was very unrealistic. no one in their right mind no matter how much they cared about Luffy in the crew in the show, end the end to them it's just an anime, nothing more or less, to put their lives on the line for especially when they're about to face the their first big hurdle on the Grand line against the strongest foe they've come across yet with logia abilities. for this part it would have been better if he have reincarnated in the East blue at least there he would have had a chance at surviving even though your normal this is if he'd still decided to follow Luffy by the way if you have went off on his own he would have been fine). but yeah so MC decides to go and at least warned the Rebellion which is still within human limits even though you might be regarded as a spy captured and imprisoned but still within human limits. but after this MC makes the dumbest most illogical decision especially coming from someone who already knows what kind of powers and strength the people from the one piece world have. he decides to go I try to kill crocodile with the palace soldiers just because he knows he's weak to water as if he hadn't seen Luffy get wrecked by crocodile even when we had the same strategy now this was stupid by all means just a forceful way to move the story along just so we can see the MC power awaken. now regardless of all things this is actually the part that I liked because of the title everyone was wondering what type of devil fruit the MC will get when I found out it was a water logia one which definitely could be considered the ultimate fruit in the one piece World by far I thought" wow if the author uses this power right I can forgive all the dumb s*** that happened earlier" and lo and behold he does MC uses the power and versatile and ingenious ways as you should if you are a reincarnator from Earth and even the comedy picks up along the way and the story just ends up jamming along with the one piece vibe with a few hiccups along the way(mc telling people he's from another world and I mean everybody and MC sharing knowledge that he knows of the future that is never a good thing in a story especially in a fanfic like one piece especially not with the main character like Luffy he's not going to want to know that anyway so why did you even open up your mouth there was absolutely no reason for you to do this you just wanted a reason to do a time travel Arc so you can go back in the past and collect Robin's mom and I could tell that you were even thinking about Odin's wife for a little bit but at least you have a little smidgen of Shame left and decided not to). this leads to after marineford Arc this is where stuff starting to get really bad as I said the MC ends up going back in time after a supposed death after the war ends up on Rogers ship sails the ocean with them for just a little while and actually ends up acknowledging him is your captain!!!!!????? hold up hold up I know people are giving you a lot of grief about fanboying over Luffy and stuff but at least once you decided something stick to it. ever heard of loyalty much do you think Zoro or any of the other crew would ever go and acknowledge somebody else as their Captain just because they sailed on the same ship as them for a little while? come on man. eventually after sailing around with Rodger for a while they meet Whitebeard clash with them a few times and eventually ends up meeting Odin and his wife who are who is basically the key to him getting back to his own time. the dumb part is he tries to play off her character as someone who is very manipulative and not understanding of others plight because she basically ends up using him to fight off kaido which is super dumb because you basically just went off and triggered one of the end games fights way before it's supposed to happen and not even with your own crew and Captain good job stealing that Adventure and fight from them. also Odin's wife character is nothing like that if she had the to send him back to his original time she would have done it the moment he asked especially when he told her he had a wife and kid he was going back to especially considering he and Odin are friends she definitely isn't the type to manipulate others for her own gains you can tell that just by reading the whole back story Oda does on the wano country. So eventually after being used to fight kaido MC gets sent back to his own time ends up loitering around fisherman Island waiting on the straw hats and expanding more on his water Powers by learning Fishman karate which should have been done way earlier by one of the Fishman on Rogers crew who knew Fishman karate and was probably stronger than jinbei at the time but author probably just wanted it for the excuse of hey let's have the MC interact with jinbei while on Fishman Island after this thing's get way worse all the women in the World start throwing themselves at the MC just because.... come on bro. turns out ultimate Fruit Stand For he can copy any devil fruit in the world so he's basically God now so no more tension between the fights or skill after all MC can just stop time and kill you in a second. MC also decides to take over all of Luffy's fights just because even though those fights are supposed to be for Luffy's growth and even now author is supposedly having the MC go to Wano in order to kill kaido over something he really shouldn't even be triggered over "oh no it turns out one of the seven scabbard's was a traitor I wasn't expecting that when I wrote this fanfic" LOL yeah it wouldn't have been such a big deal if you have went off on your own and got your own adventure instead of piggybacking off Luffy's. so yeah this turned into a rant basically a classic case of a good story gone bad in the middle and turning into a complete s*** by the end so not worth your time.