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here_iam
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the story is about the mc who found himself in one piece, so the mc as a super fanboy of Luffy and his crew decide to help Luffy. ( note: Luffy don't know what is the meaning of a pirate, he think of it as a game) well, usually every fanfiction is writing because of the author like how the fiction world is, or because the beauties, or the powers inside this world, and it is rare to see mc willing to be the side character like this novel, as everyone knows the moment the mc moved to this world normally he must seek his goal coz he is not watching the show anymore but a real world, but the mc of this novel did not awaken from his otaku mode and set a goal to help some random guys in this world that have no relationship with him, yes I know he loved Luffy but that is not a reason to set aside your life and be his babysitter. as for him revealing his secrets to the straw hats, (let's not mention that Luffy is just like a child that he can't keep secrets at all ), only if the author is not writing this fanfic for readers but to pass time than I think he must not let his mc open his moth every time because all readers prefer a calm and cautious mc, as I can see the straw hats have no right to question his origin, (let's not mention that he look like a little kid that want talk about himself). I read it to 90 chapters not because I like it but because I wanted to see the mc wake up and part ways with the straw hats, but what did he do? he became the cupid of love for Luffy and boa and Zoro and his girl than telling them they are manga characters created by oda, sigh and that's the moment I know it hopeless i have no right to tell the author on how to write his novel so good luck

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HazeChris
HazeChrisLv4HazeChris

Thanks for sacrifice not gonna waste my time reading this fan-fin!![img=recommend]

Deadrule_vivek
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agree with you there

Mr_neko
Mr_nekoLv4Mr_neko

thank you for telling me this before or i would have died from cringe after reading this.

Mr_neko
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JRCaste
JRCasteLv4JRCaste

Thanks for the save brother 👍