Review Detail of WriterWen in The Crystals

First and foremost, I would like to commend the author! Prince of Lightning, you've done a great job writing this novel! Although, as you said, the writing style is not of the best quality, but aren't we all learning in the process? I can see the improvements in your writing! Keep up the good work! Your update schedule is not a problem, you're doing much better than others as well. The only thing that is a bit off to me is the fact that the story development is going a little too fast. It's okay if you don't want to get stuck in a specific scene but making it too fast will make us, your readers, feel confused and we can't fully sympathize with the MC's hardships. Nonetheless, you are able to portray the characters well. I must say, you can make a character really hateful! Even I want to bash their heads on the wall in anger! As for Zohaifa, I can see his adventurous attitude! Can you make him a little less ignorant though? The guy keeps disclosing his information to anyone he meets! What if they are his enemies? Wouldn't he be placing himself in a dangerous position for not even keeping his abilities a secret? Although Red-I hasn't been given a lot of screentime as I am writing this review, I am starting to like his character. I'd like to refer to him as the "Thesaurus guy" lol. Hopefully, he and Zohaifa would become partners in crime so I can read more about him. Well, it's just my wish though. Enough with my blabbering! Thank you for creating this wonderful world of crystals, Prince! I can see the influence of crystals in the naming sense of the characters. Keep up the good work! I'll be patiently waiting for your updates.