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BeautifulAssasin
BeautifulAssasinLv15yr
2019-10-20 22:23

I am rating this as a five start so far. but I can change my rating later on. I am liking how the author is trying to create an enjoyable light novel for us. I also see that she is not a native English speaker so I cannot judge her to highly on the grammar wise part. I just hope that she continue to get better and better. I want to see the author becoming better and better grammar wise

Hacking Special Armed Forces System

BellaEstrella
4.8
11 Chs

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L0c4tr0n4s3xy
L0c4tr0n4s3xyLv1

this is the first light novel that I read here. I am in love with the female mc. she is amazing I would like to have the system that she have. it would be amazing. I am loving how strong she is from the start, but still got time to go eat

5yr

Drangolovo
DrangolovoLv1

I love how the author-san is making this story come to live. I know that there only 4 chapter so far but I am loving this book. I hope that it get better and better as time goes on. you will have a fan here. I love how the MC is acting so far. I cannot wait to see what comes next. keep up the good work

5yr
MafiosaSexy
MafiosaSexyLv2

The more chapter that the author publish the more hook I get with the story. I like the fact that the MC is strong as hell but still she go and eat like nothing have happen. so far I am liking how the is doing thing. I also hope that there will be more interaction between the MC and other world later on

5yr
llDarkCloudsll
llDarkCloudsllLv2

i am enjoin how this story is progressing. I hope that I get better and better. I love how amazing the gods want to protect their empress even though she do not need protection. She is one strong badass girl. the main issue that I have with this novel is that the author need to get better at grammar. this will help the story flow better. I believe that the author she or he might not be native English speaker. the way that I come up with this conclusion is because of the he or she writes.

5yr
veckenschtein
veckenschteinLv15

Reveal spoiler

5yr
BellaEstrellaLiNa
BellaEstrellaLiNaLv3

I like this novel so far. It is really good. I hope that it can get more chapters. I am loving the mc of this story so far. I hope that it gets to 100 or more chapters

5yr
Tmacistalosa
TmacistalosaLv1

I am loving this book. the only issue that I have with it is the grammar it need to get a little better. when that happen the story will be even more amazing. I hope that the author keep up the good work.

5yr
lmmastumadre
lmmastumadreLv1

I can see where the Mc is heading now with the skill of singing. this will be good I cant wait for her to become an S celebrity. I want her to be known. I love how the MC is super powerful but still is not using her power yet. I want to see what is going to happen next. I cannot wait for her to meet the group of gods that are coming her way

5yr
BellaEstrella
BellaEstrellaAuthor

Shameless review. I hope that everyone is enjoying the light novel. I am having a blast while writing it. English is my second language. I hope that if there is a mistake that you guy spot will tell me, and I will fix it. I hope as well that everyone would give me criticism that way I can grow to a better author.

5yr
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