Item: Hacking Special Armed Forces System
Rating: 5

llDarkCloudsllLv25yr

2019-10-20 21:53

i am enjoin how this story is progressing. I hope that I get better and better. I love how amazing the gods want to protect their empress even though she do not need protection. She is one strong badass girl. the main issue that I have with this novel is that the author need to get better at grammar. this will help the story flow better. I believe that the author she or he might not be native English speaker. the way that I come up with this conclusion is because of the he or she writes.

Hacking Special Armed Forces System

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