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Review Detail of Yanluo in Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

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I normally never write reviews but well I guess for that story I need to do it. When I started reading this book at first it was a really bad experience cause the English wasn’t understandable at some points and u were forced to use ur brain to get the lines. I mean my English isn’t good as well cause it’s not my mother language/tongue but the author didn’t even made the he/she or his/her correct BUT the story overall is really really great. The author and the story has a lot of potential. The system is really well thought out. Of course not perfect cause for system novels it’s hard to memorize everything and u will made fails with numbers/math at some point especially if u just started with writing novels ... Overall the author is doing a really good job. I’m enjoying reading this book and want to read more and more (sadly I’m on the newest chapter). So guys give it a try and stop writing on every chapter that the English/grammar is terrible... nobody is perfect 👌🏻 u all know how hard it is to learn a other/new language.

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All chapters are right now being edited , so thank you for kind words.

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And the other thing is for language is not only learn it , learn the language that good that became that good at it to write a book for it. So maybe learning language itself is not that hard but trying to write a book in a other language than your own mother tongue is really hard thing to do.