The grammar is really bad. But it isn't the worst I've seen. The main problem I have with this novel is that its named Kaiju system but the mc isn't a Kaiju at all. He was zilla for like the first 2 chapters then he was a human. I really wanted a Kaiju novel not some off brand Beast Boy.
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hey actually quite like it it's pretty neat on how the story is going and I like the concept of of the being that gave him the system messing with him cuz if you think about every being that gave you a system might as well be able to rewrite reality itself and mess with you whenever they wanted to like if you can give you a system that either destroys the reality that you're in or you write the laws physically to match it or match its characteristic so it can exist you might as well be able to mess with the mc itself most time I find hilarious and sometimes stupid if they don't cuz they talk about being bored and they could have done this all along makes you think of a lot of things
