so far pretty good, story feels smooth and easy to read, events make "sense" and dont feel rushed, so grammar and writing is good mc feels intelligent and quick to adapt, so please keept it that way. id also really like to see a zombie survival novel with a necromancer, but thats just a suggestion good story so far
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LIKE... I was writing an essay of ideas in a comment on my phone but webnovel wanted me to login again **** Anyway short strokes on what I wrote was Giving much concrete advice or suggestions would be a bit much since the novel just started. If youâve ever read âi have a mansion in the post-apocalyptic worldâ and âlords empireâ I think a mixup of the 2 would be pretty cool to work towards. Personally Iâm also a sucker for system novels so please keep the stat panel dahm I love seeing the numbers go up The most obvious thing to do would be for him to go look for his friends family etc and go grind some infected, potentially have some die depending on how much you are into it being sad and tragic But then again i like my mcâs edgy and with plot armor thicc enough to stop a direct nuclear blast Anyway hope my rambeling have atleast brought you something you can use Good luck on your novel
Aotsuki_Usaginoha:Thanks for the review. You are amongst the very few people that actually gave me a review, and I appreciate it. Though I am an ******* writer, writing as I go. I would appreciate it if you were to suggest some things that I could add to the story! đ