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Condemned
CondemnedLv45yr
2019-12-12 16:30

Well I will be honest here. I am not a fan of pure romance novels, but the premise for this book is quite interesting and it also have an air of mystery as what was shown on the first chapter that i have read so far. As for the writing quality, well there is not much mistakes, but you need to improve more on the tenses and minimize the number of incomplete sentences. You could have merged some of the incomplete sentences to form a complete one to make it sound more... you know.. "right". Overall, the premise is interesting and there is room for character growth and world building.

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