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CryptoCatLv55yr
2019-11-02 05:33

I’ve read a few chapters so far and can say that I enjoy the basic premise of the story, the only downside being that extreme lack of punctuation within the first few chapters. The writing itself is legible and while the author could learn to use more synonyms, the plot itself is interesting. There aren’t any noticeable cliches yet which allows for the story to develop its own unique charm and pave way for interesting plot. The only suggestion I have would be for the author to employ a editor, it would make the novel ten times more enjoyable to read and allow for the paragraphs to transition smoothly.

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Also I would like to add that this novel has potential and that I look forward to when I can remove this review for one that has 5 stars.😁

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