Item: Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc
Rating: 4
Author: wickedwinter

wickedwinterLv45yr

2019-10-25 21:18

I'll be honest. I haven't read much fantasy here in Webnovel. I've mostly read Western Fantasy Novels. Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc reads like a game fantasy novel. The first two chapters felt more like a prologue than real ones. There are only three chapters so it's hard to judge the plot yet. The first chapter has info dumps but it gives the reader an impression that the author has thought a lot about the background of the story and the characters which is a good sign. The grammar could be improved more. The third chapter is far better and following that, I'm sure the author will improve as well. I liked the three characters as well as how they have their own specific powers. Good luck with your work! Keep writing!

Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc

BlackCarapace

4.4

22 Chs

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BlackCarapaceAuthor

Thanks for your review

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Thank you so much for readers who support this novel. Author will keep updating this book. Sorry if there were grammatical error. Enjoy the book. Have fun.

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WWFireLv4

You got an interesting plot right here, a pity that your grammar is far from perfect. Let me guess, english isn't your first language? I can tell that you give your all to make the story flow even with your limitation here. In fact, I have a certain sense of familiarity from your writing style, ah yes, I used to write like this too. Consider running a grammar checker as you write, it will help a lot on your improvement. The "god fragments" mentioned in chapter 2 kind of came out of nowhere; it lacked necessary "build-up" for the new terms to come out, is it better this way? Think of it. If it was me, I would use a subjective term such as "releasing a hidden power in him, the power of the Wind God!" in the second chapter, then will begin explaining the fragments in the later chapter instead. Come find me again if you think you have improved your grammar and syntax. I may support you further by then. For now, good luck on your journey.

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ShinSungmiLv4

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Good novel, very interesting story. The background of the story is also interesting. This is a novel that is worth following. 😁😁😁😁😁😁

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The premise of the story is interest g and the synopsis makes it intriguing. A few dramatically errors here and there but mo5hing that can't be fixed. All the best for your future endeavours, Author!

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May1stLv14

Not bad. Grammar isn't really the issue, but the use of words. You should pay closer attention to it. Goodluck

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SpajkLv5

This story has an interesting idea about returning in time and fixing past mistakes, Demon kings, Gods, and magic. But the writing quality is just not good, grammar leaves a lot to be desired. If author wrote this in his own language he would have a good novel. Updates are frequent for now.

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BlackCarapaceAuthor

For every one who read this book. Author had fixed the grammars. Please continued support this book. thanks.

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