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ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiLv45yr
2019-11-02 11:35

Although this isn't the genre I usually read, fhe plotline seems decent, and if someone prefers this type of story, then they might like it. There are few grammatical errors which should be corrected.

Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc

BlackCarapace
4.4
22 Chs

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BlackCarapace
BlackCarapaceAuthor

Thank you so much for readers who support this novel. Author will keep updating this book. Sorry if there were grammatical error. Enjoy the book. Have fun.

5yr

LightofMobile
LightofMobileLv2

I know this book have a slow start. But, after some chapter, it's getting better and better. I recommend you guys for those who like fantasy with mc from weak to strong

5yr
WWFire
WWFireLv4

You got an interesting plot right here, a pity that your grammar is far from perfect. Let me guess, english isn't your first language? I can tell that you give your all to make the story flow even with your limitation here. In fact, I have a certain sense of familiarity from your writing style, ah yes, I used to write like this too. Consider running a grammar checker as you write, it will help a lot on your improvement. The "god fragments" mentioned in chapter 2 kind of came out of nowhere; it lacked necessary "build-up" for the new terms to come out, is it better this way? Think of it. If it was me, I would use a subjective term such as "releasing a hidden power in him, the power of the Wind God!" in the second chapter, then will begin explaining the fragments in the later chapter instead. Come find me again if you think you have improved your grammar and syntax. I may support you further by then. For now, good luck on your journey.

5yr
CherShootX
CherShootXLv6

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Saubi1234
Saubi1234Lv10

Good novel, very interesting story. The background of the story is also interesting. This is a novel that is worth following. 😁😁😁😁😁😁

5yr
Shiksha_Jerath
Shiksha_JerathLv5

The premise of the story is interest g and the synopsis makes it intriguing. A few dramatically errors here and there but mo5hing that can't be fixed. All the best for your future endeavours, Author!

5yr
May1st
May1stLv14

Not bad. Grammar isn't really the issue, but the use of words. You should pay closer attention to it. Goodluck

5yr
Spajk
SpajkLv5

This story has an interesting idea about returning in time and fixing past mistakes, Demon kings, Gods, and magic. But the writing quality is just not good, grammar leaves a lot to be desired. If author wrote this in his own language he would have a good novel. Updates are frequent for now.

5yr
BlackCarapace
BlackCarapaceAuthor

For every one who read this book. Author had fixed the grammars. Please continued support this book. thanks.

5yr
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