Review Detail of Aysel_Inara in La Serpiente, Foxy cursed bride in CEO Ghost's lair

●>Before you begin || read this<● If you are reading this review in between the month of [March-April 2020], then please be patient because I'm going to begin with editing in a few days. Secondly I want to state a few things as per calculated with comments more likely want to elaborate. ○There aren't any poisons actually, metaphorically I've stated greed, lust for power & jealousy as venoms. ○There isn't any basilisk, instead just symbolically the sound is stated. ○The major theme revolves around those elements, magic element lies in second place. ○The narration style is indeed readable but needs polishing and spice of vocabulary. On which I'll work soon. ■About Characters■ ○The Lord of Hell, Hades is portrayed but I haven't stated the Gods as some OP and killing machine, rather the Gods are neutral, behaving like humans, loving and yes, some action too. ○As for this is first draft, the characters have flaws & needs rebuilding, which I'll begin soon. ○There are flashes of past as Syna and Sinclair MacLaverty have been reborn but this isn't a system or reincarnation theory, just flashes to clear up the past things. ■Characters List■ ○Sinclair MacLaverty || Ghost Lord/Ruler of Spirit Realm ○Jason MacLaverty || Younger brother ○Syna Rhys || Cursed Bride/Previously a princess ○Lolita aka Hestia || Syna's friend ○Brandon Brighton || Apparently seems Syna's suitor ○Braille Matteo Leste || Jason's mate ○Phobe || The Villain ○Iñigo De Raizel || Vampire Noble Lord ○Elmore Drago || Guard of Spirit Realm ○Isabella Drago || Elder sister ○Mr Lorenzo || Orphanage owner ○Mr & Mrs Benz || Partner in Orphanage 》Will appreciate constructive criticism.