Review Detail of RedLaw in ENDLESS MYTH : Surpassing the Gods.

I not shameless enough to say that my story deserves 5 star whith so few chapters. But I have enough pride in my work to say that it's a little above average. Of course I may be wrong, but I will do my best to show that it isn't the case. For the time being, my release rate will be 3 or 4 chapters each week. I'm a law student and writing is a time consuming activity that doesn't mesh well with study. My story will be based on myth, mostly greck, but also Nordic and other little myth . The power system will not only be based on constellations. There will be others thing such a atavism, summon, spell etc. The humans will not be the unique race. I plan to add the usual fantasy races such as beast men, elves etc The pace will be a little slow at the start since I don't want to **** up but the pace will pick up later. There will be romance, more precisely a harem, there will also be some steamy sex scene(but not anytime soon ). For the harem, too much women in it will considerably reduce the screen time of the others so I don't plan to add more than 4 or 5 girls. I am a fan of few very big harem, sadly I don't have the skill of the author so I will not bite more that I could chew. My real problem is my grammar. Frankly my english is basically self taught so I can make many mistakes without even knowing. I ask you to bear a little with me and I will do my best to deliver more grammatically correct chapters. All in all my story isn't much right now, but I plan to make it one of the best.