Review Detail of LittleBlueLake in Fragments of Your Love [Quick Transmigration]

The story is simple but sweet- though I agree it’s kind of fast paced especially relationship wise and the writing could use some work however it’s not bad and definitely has a lot of potential. I’ve only read the first arc so far and I do think that the biggest pro is how cute the two interact are and the biggest con seemed to be how ‘easy’ it was? Like it’s a taboo relationship but there was barely any complications and such so the world building and extra characters could probs use some more effort but other than that I’m looking forward to how you improve in the future! Keep it up!