Review Detail of DaoistB24PpS in Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

I was enjoying the novel despite all the grammar errors,mess of thoughts and sentences,i also liked how the author chosed a different path for mc than shrek,but then mayi was introducted and 2 chapters later she was already clingy and annoying as hell,it was just too sudden and i just got more confused.when her background was revealed only made this seems more stupidy and unecessary(Maybe i should start throwing oreo around and see if someone will fall for me),Mc also seemed to have no special trait except brain damage,even when he grows up he still acts like a child. Some side characters except for having the same name as the original series dont act like themselves at all. I got to vol 3 and then dropped,so my rating is based on what i experienced