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I created a post on the forum and @Webnovel_Translate. Upvote it so that someone notices.

The novel was decent and then it abruptly ends at 795. It is not actually completed, the Author drops the novel and finishes it with one chapter.

Those chapters are in privilege. We will get more chapters after privilege chapters are restocked. The most privilege chapters I have seen is 26, so just about 11 more at most.

As an "adult with so much wordly experience", is he so delued to think that leaving the academy will automatically make the fugitives safe? Just because he leaves the academy does not mean they won't kill the people they want to....

This is confusing. He is walking with fugitives and then is surprised when they are stopped? He said already "They will expect us to go to the academy so that's where they will go first" If you knew they went to the academy, then they will report the description of the fugutives and anyone with them will also be arrested. It's no brain stuff.. It's already weird that he just collects strays, but the surprise at having to bear with the results of his actions... Really? I already know plot armor will solve this, but the forced situations are difficult to read.

Yes lol. The only thing saving this mtl is the editor. This editor is putting in a lot of work, but that only makes it bearable, not good.

Review after chapter 217. Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks. Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance? Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech. Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion. This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!

I mean, it's weird, but not that bad. Truly a weird thing to do unless the main character and his family are not portrayed as very evil though.

I'm confused. What even was the name?

This was my sentiment after quitting at 512. I stayed much longer than I should have tbh. Waiting over 500 chapters for a glimpse is really not enough satisfaction. I can understand people liking it for the regression vrmmo side, but for the people that came in for the interaction with the real world, I'm assuming they were heavily disappointed.