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Sorahana
SorahanaLv145yr
2019-11-03 22:52

The story has only begun with one chapter, so there's still a lot of space for development, but from the first chapter, I have to say that it's really good and it's definitely a hidden gem 😍 The description made the story flow very well and it's easy to imagine them in your head. It was as if you're there and see them with your own eyes. For the writing quality, I'll give it 5/5 I'm not that good in grammar, but I didn't see anything wrong, so full score from me. for the stability of updates, it's only the first chapter, so I'll also give 5/5 Story development, character design, and world background might still change, so I'll give them all 5/5 I'll be waiting for new updates of this novel~ This is certainly a promising one, thank you for posting this, TheTalkingCupcakes 💕💕💕 -From a TalkingSky 😂

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TheTalkingCupcake
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Thank you so much, TalkingSky 🙌🏻 Much love and bless from me to you! Wouldn’t have done it without your help and feedback! Really appreciate it! Still got some learning to do and hope you will enjoy it more! 🥰🥰🥰

CookieJiyen
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Woahh couldn't agree more!

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