Review Detail of BookDevourer87 in Rebirth: The Shadow of Greed

I read until chapter 109. So far it has been a massive waste of time! I was hoping for something more, since this novel is a rewritten novel, because the author wasn't satisfied with his initial work.... But I can just guess how bad the initial novel has been, when the rewritten one ist as bad as it is now 🙈. Grammar and correct use of past, present and future are obviously not Mr. Authors strong points... Not even nearly! Character builds are strange and change in-between, like the girl with the power to control liquids and later on she is capable to create cold and ice at will. Initially she was only capable of freezing liquids over because of some artifact... Even MC has no real personality, as he acts differently most of the time, as his initial description described him to be... Antagonists and MCs friends are cliché as hell and encounters are often close to copy paste to other chinese novels... It's like Mr. Author is compiling standard settings and happenings from other novel so much, that he is drowning the few good ideas of his own... The only good point I have found so far is, that this story hasn't gone premium. Seems like the author at least knows, that he hasn't yet reached the level of writing, where it is justified to ask for money. I hope that in the future Mr author uses novels like Supreme magus or legendary mechanic as inspiration and not those ever-repeating standard cultivation novels... Dropping this novel and moving on!