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Review Detail of DipTheDoggie in Rebirth: The Shadow of Greed

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DipTheDoggie
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It’s very unoriginal and full of cliche moments. I don’t want to read a novel where it’s pretty much copy pasted scenes from other lame novels. I’m out.

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Rebirth: The Shadow of Greed

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Roughlydone
RoughlydoneAuthorRoughlydone

Thanks for leaving a review anyway, I understand it's not something you want to read and I accept that. Is it cliche? Yes very much so. As a first time writer, I based it off of the novels that I loved to read, it's not easy for new writers to write fully original scenes and things that are subverting clichés. But yeah, I understand where you're coming from and I'll try to improve.

Roughlydone
RoughlydoneAuthorRoughlydone

Thanks for leaving a review anyway, I understand it's not something you want to read and I accept that. Is it cliche? Yes very much so. As a first time writer, I based it off of the novels that I loved to read, it's not easy for new writers to write fully original scenes and things that are subverting clichés. But yeah, I understand where you're coming from and I'll try to improve.

CriticalReader
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Cliche and unoriginal despite the rewrite