Review Detail of Ruby_Red_8541 in The Female lead is a Lesbian

Rant: I started reading this expecting to love it. What's better than a badass lesbian? However, I found that the writing was sorely lacking. For instance, in chapter 4, you see a doctor checking in on his patient. You are then immediately told that this doctor is a disgusting rapist and that the nurse is a crazy killer. And the MC knew this by his voice???? Everything was so abrupt and random. It was like the author thought "Hmmm what are some of the most disgusting and vile things a human can do, and then tell the reader that they did them without any warning, so the reader will HATE these characters and cheer for the heroin." I couldn't be invested in this story at all because there was so little imagination and build to the plot. And I found myself barely able to understand the story do to poor writing skills. I know what it's like to be a young author and to not have much experience and that it's very hard to write. Personally, it was hard to comprehend what was happening. (On that note, the pacing was non-existent). There was so little that made me want to feel anything for these characters because they didn't seem to hold any depth to them what so ever. I think it's a nice idea but the execution was not it. -I know this rant might be all over the place, I am just really disappointed. I REALLY wanted to like this, but I could barely read it :(