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Get some hammers, we’re building a bridge from Zoey to Annie! RIGHT NOW! I SAID NOW!
Oh my f****** lord! If they dont get together soon I’m gonna scream!
Match made in heaven
Holy s***. She and Zoey are soulmates!
I claim this child as my kin
Childhood! Summed up!
Okay, that’s kinda funny !
I actually gagged at this! Pink is cool, but I actually gagged! Eesh!
Why do I love you?! Three Days Grace
Petition for ‘the therapist’ to have an actual name! This chapter was awesome however. Love, love, love it! Great job! Also, I think this is actually very accurate. I mean I always had a ****y weeny problem with how most protagonists are like “ Oh, I died! Oh, well!” Which is understandable if they had no family or an abusive one. But if you get run down by a truck or stabbed I would expect some kind of ptsd. And i feel like people are being a bit unreasonable. I’ve seen people go on saying this story is unrealistic. Well, thats a given, but then they say that no one seems sane. I kinda find it refreshing. I feel like it puts actual medical lables on these cliche stereotypes. Then it delves deeper into how they become what they were. It’s clear that Annie is suffering from depression, PTSD, anxiety and is obviously spinning. I didn’t know how much I needed a character like her. It’s said that drowing and burning in a fire along with freezing to death is one of the most painful deaths you can experience. People wanted realistic, this is realistic! The human mind can experience trauma in a snap! All the best people are crazy!-Melanie Martinez I am low on sleep and high on caffeine. This why I wrote this! Why!?!?
She’s the prostitue Stone beat up when Zoey kidnapped him
Unpopular opinion. I like Rose. I mean she’s a total b**** but like Zoey she’s not like your typical antagonist. You gotta admit that most villainesses or antagonists are usually spoiled and jealous b******. But I feel like this takes a more realstic approach to a villainess! Like, Rose and her siblings were raised in a highly toxic environment. Her dad slapped her so hard in one chapter and then gave this petty little apology and her mom just says marry for power and they’re just awful. And I’m pretty sure it says that Rose was beaten by her mother. But instead of ending up the poor abused heroine girl she ended up as a cold heaRted a**h***. I feel that’s a more realstic villain backstory then her just being A spoiled brat. In fact she reminds me of Rashta from the remarried empress. If the story was told from Rose’s point of view we’d probably cheer her on for the most part. She knows how to manipulate, how to act, and what to say to get what she wants. She uses her looks to divde and conquer and she’s pretty smart. She gets what she wants and though she has a few screws loose I wouldnt expect anything less after hearing how she grew up. Overall you have to admit that she’s a pretty well built character. She can still go die though.
B****! The audacity!
The writing has improved immensely! I cant tell if this was her plan all along but that epic fourth wall break just WOW! This I feel like sheds some light on the characters and the story! How the characters are basically under the author’s thumb! But how one fights back when realizing the author is basically a tyrant! This is amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter! And for those reading this give it a chance okay?
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