Transported to Another World? Cultivation World? A Modern World? How about mixing all of them? From countless planet in the Universe, Each planet has its own technology, culture, and civilization. There are many plot twists mixed inside where the usual 'Another World' actually holds more mystery. (Writing Quality): I'm not a native English speaker, and revision is under progress. There should be some mistakes left, but it shouldn't be that much. And there should be some cliches that presented in a bad way. It is also under revision. Although I can't completely erase that part cause it might affect the later story. I am rewriting it, so it can at least be presented in a better way. Unfortunately, the revision speed is rather slow since I need to make the new chapter as well. (Stability of Updates): 1 ch/day. But it could be 2 ch/day at weekends or holidays depending on how much time I have on that day. (Story Development): 'This is subjective'. I'm doing my best to present a good story, but it depends on your own preference too. One might say good, and one might say bad. Please don't force your ideal/preferences on this story, if you want the MC this way or the MC that way, you can try to write your own story. All in all, suggestions for a better story would be appreciated. (Character Design): MC has a deep-seated inferiority complex that built up for several years. It will be hard to get rid of all of that, logically. It wasn't something that you can say 'I want to change', and you will change 180 degrees. It will be a slow development of Characters and Personalities. (World Background): The story takes place in multiple world; most of the settings are fictional. If the world background is lacking some details, please do tell me 'which one' and 'what it is' so I can add a little tweaking in that part to make a better world. (Additional Comments): Many good scenes filled my mind that I can't help to write and share it with you all. Although, I know myself wasn't a great writer. I need all possible feedback to learn and improve. For you and me. Disclaimer: I will no longer respond to mean comments and reviews. All opinions are subjective. But, please, be gentle with any strong opinions. It's easy to say something behind a screen, but it can stick with people. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy my novel.

Just a weakling that's given an amazing opirtnital system.But not only does he cower in the face of his bullies he ignores and dosent even respect the ones that try to care. He spends almost 5 months with a girl that got along and actually liked a little.But then pratically gives her the cold sholder when she tries not only to defend him and pretect him.But also has the nereve to compare the girl that stays and defends him compared to the girl that cheats and gets him bullied and thrown out the castle. I'm not saying it's a bad novel its amazing so far but **** does the mc piss me off.

It's a pretty good story, its just for me personally the female characters just ruin it.

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Hateful MC and Bitches... You seem planned the MC become a sovereign yet with the starting As lowest of the lowest, and the main motivation of it a revenge. Why don't you just make Dark MC instead of this... Have to say good bye for this. The Synopsis reel me in the beginning of the story make me hate it. So, good bye..

Very cool ideas are presented in this cultivation novel. The MC inherits a system after being reincarnated to a new world. Seems normal enough for this genre right? Wrong! Gacha system is hilarious and relatable. You want the ultra rare prize? Think again, have a trash water bottle. Later he obtains sword intent and domain. Again, seems normal for this setting right? Wrong! He actually uses both sword and spear, and with their powers combined, he fuses the intents into something much stronger. This story is very interesting, but sometimes I feel like the release of chapters is a bit slow. The writing is pretty good, although some decisions are questionable. I hope the author continues this work and both the story and author mature into perfection.

The protagonist has same amount of intelligence as gollum, a betrayed person who is revealing all his secrets to everyone. He says he don’t fame but his actions prove otherwise. He wants to grow strong but spend all his time being chef and trainer for some girls who he don’t trust much. The protagonist is looking be betrayed. So, I’m dropping this novel.

The story is good but why is this mc so fucking average? So fucking trashy that my eyes hurt whenever I read the mc's situation who cant even handle some situations.

Chapter 36: dropping The novel starts with some promises in the first 10 chapters but quickly turns into "a new antogonist shows up criticizing MC background" "why are you with her lowly commoner" "sigh" "punch in the face" "how dare you raise your hand on me" "the king is my grandpa" This is absolutely breaking the story. Then there are more minor issues: - The leveling doesn't make sense so author had to divide level by 100 and create a rank system and levels were never heard of again. - The pills are completely overpowered - The gacha system takes a complete backseat on MC power trip: it could have been used for random missions for example - the progress is bland: pill forging, fights, there is no sense of struggle and so no sense of accomplishment. - somehow the useless MC is a fighter that knows dirty techniques like tripping people but nothing in his background or gacha rewards hints to that Lastly the grammar is passable (I read much worse on webnovel) however please be consistent, use past tense only and don't suddenly switch to present. You can use present for dialogues. Chapter 36 had a significant drops in quality of English with many verb missing like "confused" instead of "was confused". It didn't help that it was chapter where the "arrogant young master seeks a fight" trope was used for the 4th time in a row. .