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ComplicateLv135yr
2019-10-08 14:21

Very good novel! MC is a reincarnated guy in a cripple body, he gains his powers back after some time. He is not a forgiving type, as title may suggest. Relationship with his family (close one) is very good, his parents and grandfather care about him, so it wont be a revenge plot where he runs,power up and kill everyone. Thanks to his newfound powers(they slowly influence him, i dont want to spoil more;p) he dont have a "moral judgment" like typical reincarnated MC on topics like killing - you are in my way, death. Plot starts to thicken after he gains his powers, so be sure to read it:).

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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

Awesome . Thanks for such a nice review

Lonesome_Duck
Lonesome_DuckLv5

Ok so this sounds like the most cliche and basic novel, anything special about it?

Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

Then you should spend your time looking for something new and creating instead of spreading all your negative energy here

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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

Comment section is about your views on the novel, not about how much you hate this genre and that every novel is that same. Still I apologize if I offended you somehow

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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

if you're looking for something in Eastern fantasy section that's not Eastern fantasy, I wish you luck Anyways History's no. 1 founder is my suggestion. The idea is somewhat unique, although characters from other novels are used. I hope you enjoy your time.

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Pripriri
PripririLv5

It's good that the mc reincarnated in crippled body? Are you nuts?

KILLER72
KILLER72Lv3

NO THIS NOVEL HAS A REVENGE PLOT ABOUT HIS FATHER'S MISSING INCIDENT

KILLER72
KILLER72Lv3

MC DOESN'T NOT HAVE AN CRIPPLED BODY BUT MENTALLY AFFECTED

ldhoonie
ldhoonieLv3

Basically this is 'Nine Star Hegemon Body Art' ripoff, am I right? Long Chen in NSHBA is also like this, is also filled with countless schemes and plots, the higher his progress in cultivation gets, the more sinister the scheme is. If you are a fan of NSHBA then you will also likely compare this novel to NSHBA. 😄

John_Titor
John_TitorLv6

G e n e r i c

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John_TitorLv6

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John_Titor
John_TitorLv6

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John_TitorLv6

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Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10

LOL you do realize cliches are not part of the"Eastern fantasy" genre

Demonic_angel:if you're looking for something in Eastern fantasy section that's not Eastern fantasy, I wish you luck Anyways History's no. 1 founder is my suggestion. The idea is somewhat unique, although characters from other novels are used. I hope you enjoy your time.
Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

Cliches are something that's readers feels are overused in novels. It's not a section of novels or a story, so I won't say they mean eastern fantasy. Every novel have a cliche of their own. I didn't talk about cliches also, I didn't use the cliches of modern romance or the cliches of dungeon fantasy novels. That's what I meant

Primordial_Phoenix:LOL you do realize cliches are not part of the"Eastern fantasy" genre
PixelKid
PixelKidLv6

because people read a lot of eastern fantasy novel.. so everything will become cliche.. :3

Demonic_angel:Cliches are something that's readers feels are overused in novels. It's not a section of novels or a story, so I won't say they mean eastern fantasy. Every novel have a cliche of their own. I didn't talk about cliches also, I didn't use the cliches of modern romance or the cliches of dungeon fantasy novels. That's what I meant
Bootylover
BootyloverLv11

It has a romance tag. Need to know if ut has harem or 1 live interst?

KILLER72
KILLER72Lv3

Hi, I really liked this novel. I wish it has an manga

HatsuneMiku
HatsuneMikuLv2

Oof, semi-drama was here xD

EroticEarwig
EroticEarwigLv13

This is bar-none, the most forced/poorly-written plot I have ever read on web-novel. I lost iq reading it. Its like he wrote about a police investigator, who walked into an interrogation room, unlocked the criminals cuffs, gave the criminal a weapon and then locked his own hands in cuffs accidentally---all to create a plot of a hostage situation. Thats how terrible these events are playing out.

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MJAgoLv14

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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5

Crap, just trash. MC was killed by a typical thief and was isekai'd into a retarded 12 year old former genius, the first thing he does is go for a walk and ends up in a regular cliche. What's terrible about this novel is how stupid MC is, he was tricked by a kid into drinking poisonous tea, the reason he drank it was because the kid was like "it's not pensioned, I swear!" Suprise, suprise. It was pensioned.. Author uses this to give MC his cheat or whatever, which he feels guilt over since it wasn't originally his, amazing right? He found it in dumb-**** nowhere and he's feeling guilty. Next he proudly exposes that he's no longer retarded and has regained his "talent" to literally everyone, it's not like someone killed your father, and tried to kill you because you were both "talented' Author decided that MC has split personality disorder, calling him "Chen" in the narration and "Tian" to everyone else. As the reader and not another mob character for the MC, I find this utterly frusterating. Next is his mother and grandfather, MC was drugged and kidnapped in broad daylight, and nobody finds out, Amazing. If I had that level of stealth I would be so happy, I could sneak into all the shoppers drug marts and overdose without anyone finding out so I can forget about this novel. Anyways, his grandpa and mom didn't assign him a single supervisor despite him being "retarded." Which is, retarded. Honestly you have a kid who everyone thinks to have the IQ of a 2 year old, and how can he not have a single guard or supervisor. This caused him to be kidnapped, yay. Takes along time for background information of the world and cultivation to come out, MC acts all arrogant and shit for no apparent reason. Just think of a typical japanese Isekai "hero" from shield hero or some shit that acts like a typical douche, that's MC. Apparently innocent, but his character takes a 180 because his cousin tried to kill him and kills a guy without batting an eyelid, for someone from probably our world he might be a physcopath. This amazing move can only be considered a pro-gamer move, as a person of the same world I can only accede to his intellect on what to do when being isekai'd into an unknown wuxia world, not being cautious, but be a target. You've enlightened me author, many thanks, would only recommend to a vegetable.

House
HouseLv15

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Cepheus_7439
Cepheus_7439Lv4

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