Once again the author shows that the fan of Gate can create far better story than the author of the original Gate universe with consistency in world building, character development and story events

I suggest looking up 'Gate: A War of Two Worlds' on the website Wattpad. Posted by the same author, only the one on Wattpad has 100 more chapters released than here.

I think it was a great idea that you used the original as a base for your story. I am looking forward to what direction the story leads toward. Keep up the good work!!

Here's some constructive criticism, this story's format has issues which make it boring to read almost like a robot wrote it, first issue i have is the author keeps writing actions and events in the story in a past tense that has neither elements from a third person or a first person perspective and also has no clear MC or character introduction that is properly done, the author isn't asking himself and comparing to other fiction novels things like having a proper arc of events or perhaps having decent backstory and introductions to the characters with emotions that portray their personality instead of just typing "name : Mark Welsh sex: male blah blah blah" stupid character sheets for introductions for characters lazily and typing stuff with no excitement or perspective robottically "the tank would fire shells at x" instead of "one could hear across the battlefield a tank emptying its shells rapidly at x with explosions from the shells hitting all around its general area throwing carnage and blood and guts everywhere" it doesn't take much there to be descriptive the author needs to stop being lazy and rewrite everything so it's actually readable, and also learn how to write a good story for once.

Great story. Great development. Great pace. Great detailing. Great schedule. Great overall. Good piece of art.

Man this is a good take on the original just a different startup location as for how things go the characters are well developed the back stories are well designed too along with the deep feeling of how people would actually respond if a gate really open to a new world the slice of life added with the mission ops are a perfect blend to what soldiers would've experienced while away from home my vote read it if you want it's a good journey And a cool take on the original a lot of new elements best part is you see more than just a hero in a new world you see a team working together to change things for the better for all

An excellent Gate story with far superior quality in world building, character development, scenarios transition and of course deep relationship between characters

Like some other review said, this novel are better than the anime version (if we ignore the grammar problem part, which the author did rewrite previously some week/month ago, I can see the old original version would be even worse, so right now at least readable, oh and since I help him edit most of the grammar error, aside from the POV problem so it no longer as hard to read, beside more than half of the problem those lower than 3 stars have been solved, at least for the grammar part) The story show more realistic touch that the cannon didn't show, and less bias like the anime since the author do try to be realistic and also admit that American aren't perfect (another point is that he don't make some 'enemy' like china or north korea go full evil/retard, after all he recognize that it mostly the 'leadership' and not the people at fall here in real life). and the story also begin to go way difference after volume 2 (the Italica siege arc) and become better there, only use the cannon for some reference but still go as it own story and add backstory and stuff that not in the cannon, while still consistent and interesting, so try to be a bit patient and read to at least chapter 25 or 26 to finally see more difference (and you can check the character list and map in author discord channel, you can see the author expand way beyond what the cannon world map show, and add more stuff like new city and place in that cannon continent map there and not just simply bland) Although the author are quite new, but he have one hell of learning curve and do try to improve it, while being realistic/consistent with the story so it a plus, and it not typical self-insert and take the topic more serious, so mostly no otaku stuff (maybe the mc are a bit of nerd with western cartoon/movie like lord of the ring, transformer or similar, but that only slightly show it, oh and those character not bland, they do have lot of character developing, just a bit slow so you will see some major one in volume 5) and there are actually some new enemy general that actually competent, and some real threat that modern army just not able to handle easily, so no usual easily streamroll there like most fanfiction or cannon

I just love the idea of gate and AC-130 mowing down enemy forces like butter is nice. And China Cold War hits a little to close to home. What else is there to say explosions are interesting