This novel has a lot of potential. I believe that as long as it stays in this level of interesting things, it will be a very good so I hope the author will keep on the good work!

I love this story. The author is very interesting to read, with a very funny style of writing inner dialogue! 😍 The only problem is that there's only 3 chapters, and it seems unlikely to update soon. 😓

Its have a nice vibe. I hope its not kind. Face slaping cos i wanna read a fluffy story. And if its gonn. Face slaping hope the mc not the one doing it directly... like the gong who do it for mc probbbly

LBL COME BACKKKKKK ITS BEEN YEARS YOU CANT JUST WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS AND LEAVEEEE Just one chap a year im begging At least drop character designs so I can draw up my own fanart to sate my cravings-

Nice introduction, the setting is classic but well receive. Still waiting for new chapters to really rate it, base on the other book from same author then this one should be interesting.

Highly recommend if you're the kind of ***** who will notice that the author hasn't uploaded in months, read it anyways and then feel heartbroken because there are no new chapters and you're already way too invested in the story.

Such an amazing start! I love the author's other novel too, but I think I may grow to like this one even more!!! I hope this one can be updated soon! But for now I'll patiently wait until this gem is polished and released to the world for us to admire and praise! Thank you for an amazing story, love your eternal fan!

Firstly, the writing quality is above average, the humour being a nice touch. Secondly, The story developent is amazing, alrhough background and description of the surrounding area as well as shock factor from transmigration can be improved. Since my second point comes close to the subject of world building, I will address the world background. Although the qi and spiritual points were addressed, I feel like explanations on the jobs of shaman can be addressed too. Additional information on different qi levels could be addresed so as to know the setting (ie. cultivation world) better. Elaborating on the positions in the sect which XY’s father is the head of would be great too. Different creatures and the grading of items can also be elaborated on. Since world background also touches o character design, this webnovel is quite good at that. Although, as with any other webnovel, there are some slight problems in understanding the charaxter of XY’s siblings and who is eldest, et cetera. Lastly, UPDATING STABILITY. If you came for chapters, mass releases and similar, you will be disappointed. This book has not updated in 5 months (at this time) and most likely will not update for a long time. I pray that the author will release more chapters soon. AHHHH, who the hell am I kidding. I am doing this on my phone a week after GRADUATING EXAMS. I AM BEGGING RHE AUTHOR, PLEASE UPDATE FOR MY SANITY, THIS BOOK IS *GNIQUF* AMAZING SO... .dlrow siht quF

I was really pleasantly surprised of how good this was and then when i reached the end i found out that this is the same author of one of my other favorite books !!! I cant wait to see what direction you take this in!