Review Detail of Gutterstomp in The Lustful Dungeon Master (Hiatus)

Just kill his dungeon and become dungeon master with out dungeon. And then he Will use his brain again and not his dick.

He will almost lose everything. "Almost lose everything". Not "Lose almost everything"

He will almost lose everything. "Almost lose everything". Not "Lose almost everything"

Just make sure that you dont use betrayal plot to nerf the mc, so story can be stretched. I like your novels so I dont want to be disappointed for such stupidity. Anyways we have many options like introducing other worlds for competetion.

Just make sure that you dont use betrayal plot to nerf the mc, so story can be stretched. I like your novels so I dont want to be disappointed for such stupidity. Anyways we have many options like introducing other worlds for competetion.

Just make sure that you dont use betrayal plot to nerf the mc, so story can be stretched. I like your novels so I dont want to be disappointed for such stupidity. Anyways we have many options like introducing other worlds for competetion.

🤦‍♂️you can’t use that sentencing with “pretty much”. “Pretty much almost lose everything” is just stupid. Don’t try fixing other people’s sentencing if you yourself, the author, can’t.

🤦‍♂️you can’t use that sentencing with “pretty much”. “Pretty much almost lose everything” is just stupid. Don’t try fixing other people’s sentencing if you yourself, the author, can’t.

literally was the dumbest writing ive seen. Who tells the plot half way through in a monolog ??? Whats worse is author was on about how he learnt from being overconfident like 2 chaps before that... Her char is honestly not needed and just seems there for the author to make a plot with her. Leaving the fact he tolds us that he will its the fact he made the mc so stupid to force it thats pissed me off. It makes no sense when he keeps saying shes gonna betray him. Then he says he doesnt feel just because she submitted to him ? Does that mean if someone kills all his girls and then submits to him he wont harm them because of the fact they submitted to him ?? So many more things than just this thou... its like the authors trying to write a good story that makes us want to read then writes contradictory sht to piss everyone off for kicks...

Hi Author where are you? Are you taking a break or did something happen? I'm waiting for the next update for the perverted evil cultivator and I haven't seen any announcement about a break.

Hi Author where are you? Are you taking a break or did something happen? I'm waiting for the next update for the perverted evil cultivator and I haven't seen any announcement about a break.

I've waited with bated breath for The Lustful Dungeon Master to come off hiatus up to the end of 2019(since its the only one of your stories I read). Do you plan to continue the work in 2020(January perhaps)?

Thanks for showing so much interest in the Lustful Dungeon Master, but in sorry to say this but I don't plan on picking it back up any time soon. Though this isn't to say it'll remain on Hiatus forever, you'll most likely have to wait until at least the second half or 2020 (July) before I pick it up due to my hands being full with other novel right now Hope you understand.

Thanks for showing so much interest in the Lustful Dungeon Master, but in sorry to say this but I don't plan on picking it back up any time soon. Though this isn't to say it'll remain on Hiatus forever, you'll most likely have to wait until at least the second half or 2020 (July) before I pick it up due to my hands being full with other novel right now Hope you understand.

Hi there ero_saint, ive read some of your novels and ive to say that your obviously good at writing erotic stuff but not so good with the actual story (plot) And to be accurate, obviously not all of your novels are meh, for example the sword god one is really good. Only advice for you is to work more on your fighting scenes and character development. And btw i’ve noticed that you dont have any way to easily communicate (excluding patreon.) You got discord?

Yes, feel free to contact me on discord @ Ero_Saint#7395

Hi Ero saint Are you still alive and well? I hope so i realy liked your novels and am waiting for you to pick them up again or at least let us know that you are O.K.. hope to hear something soon couldnt find you on discord so Wfr :)

You alive mate?