Review Detail of Aysel_Inara in Clover:The world of magic and its cursed path

Quoting the title which itself is interesting as the plotline can be predicted. However there are a few punctuation and grammatical errors which I believe occurred because author is non English, but the narration is good and that flaw didn't drag down the whole thing. The mystery and magic elements are fully blended as the story moves on, author ja successfully crafted the characters well, which I believe would grow soon. Keep it up.