Review Detail of BorrowedDreams in Eodem: a Rifle and Sword Adventure

This serie is good, rarely you see a good match between the genre of sci-fi amd fantasy that works well. However I must complain on the paragraphs structure, tge majority ofnthe readers at this site use the app, which mean we are reading on mobile or tablets, long paragraphs work for books, but not amymore, you need to write with mobile devices and tablets at mind, trying to read a paragraph that is as long as two sweeps of the screen of my kindle uncomfortable.