Review Detail of LIght_Novel_San in Rebirth: President Fatah Escapes

Actually, I am here for the review swap but I didn't expect that this will get me hooked up! Writing Quality:4/5 I noticed some typographical errors and misplaced marks and some confusing passages, however, I am still impressed because it depicts the most crucial points. Stability of Updating: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Plot like this isn't something new, but your own concept of this plot makes this novel unique! Political novel is not accurately 100% hit to the readers, it needs to have an intriguing plot line and few entertaining scenarios to keep the readers going. And I want to congratulate you for achieving that! Character Design: 5/5 The MC's nature is quite likeable. He's not like other leads that became OP just because they reborned for almost 10 times. He signifies that there's still a room for improvement. He has his definite goals in life and very resolute. His mind isn't clouded with revenge (not anymore) and he's thinking more of his surroundings. Other leads like him thinks about women, women, women, and power and they became really really, really, really arrogant and annoying. Anyway, lemme give you a high-five for producing a marvelous MC! World Background:4/5 The concept or world building is really tough, truth to be told. And your current world, its concept, is still quite shaky and but I know it will progress in the future! Extra suggestions (?) 1. Okay, so I already commented this on one of the chapters: Put footnotes at the end of the chapter. You see, I really like to emphasise its importance especially to your novel because it really needs that. For example, you put a certain political or economical terminology in the chapter, unless you discuss it thoroughly in the said chapter, the readers( most of them) won't understand it because of its complexity. 2. This is not really important. You know, you can use descriptive words to describe his appearance, the people around him, the object around him, the houses or even the environment to make the story more vivid. But if your style writing is more on the MC himself, then it's okay not putting these. 3. That's all thank you! Good novel BTW 😊.