First of all, DAMN! your sentence structure and dialogue delivery. It's awesome and would be really helpful for me to study. Author did lack vocabulary and knows how to play with words to create something disastrous, humorous and serious. And that's the positive point of this novella, quoting the title it's fit for garnering the attention and as it says it's a romance but I assure you it isn't cliche. And that's another reason you'd give this a go. Japanese setting was new to me to read but I really enjoyed it a lot and lastly I wanna suggest that one should try to see through the message of love and affection, author tried to portray to us.❤ Will keep it for further structural analysis XD
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LIKEHi! Thanks for the review. I will get on to yours as soon as possible. If you really want to learn story structure, might I suggest Take Off Your Pants by Libbie Hawker. The e-book is only $0.99. If you want to invest more, I'd say try Save The Cat! Writes A Novel by Jessica Brody. Good luck with your story and thanks again. Will write that review soon. :)
wickedwinter:Hi! Thanks for the review. I will get on to yours as soon as possible. If you really want to learn story structure, might I suggest Take Off Your Pants by Libbie Hawker. The e-book is only $0.99. If you want to invest more, I'd say try Save The Cat! Writes A Novel by Jessica Brody. Good luck with your story and thanks again. Will write that review soon. :)