and you're explaining this now....... do you have anything planned out or is every chapter written without thinking ahead?

you can't just introduce a new power boost with no side effects and not explain why he didn't use this one instead when he was powerless. This is terrible storytelling, simply pulling this technic from no where is already bad enough and you can't even explain why it was first revealed now???

perfect opportunity to kidnap the daughter of another great family???? Is this guy stupid or is the author just bad at storytelling. I honestly don't know why I'm enjoying this series despite how brain dead it often is.

"on the mainland" implies there are islands which hasn't been indicated at all in the story. It makes no sense to use this term instead of just saying in the city.

"I compromise you to my daughter" makes no sense.... Please learn the definition of the words you're using and find example sentences of their use before trying to include them in the story. it's frustrating having to figure out what you mean from context when you keep doing this. another example was "skeptical day" which you used some chapters earlier which also doesn't make sense, even if it was a typo for special the context makes that an awkward use of the word special.

This author really needs to learn the definition of the words they're using. "compromise you to me daughter" makes no sense. it's not even a simple typo as they use the exact same word later.

Fantastic smut, could use some more chapters ;) but definitely enjoying the content. if you're looking for an erotic harem novel with an "evil" MC then this is a pretty good one.

Great read and great smut. Similar premise to dual cultivation but executed better in my opinion. Only problem is slow release but it could but I'm hoping with premium it will start getting more chapters per week soon.