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2019-09-27 19:29

This is your first novel but I can say that you are an amazing writer. I really liked the story. One thing I wanted to point out was that you need to read chapters again because some of the words were typed double or some sentences were incomplete and as a writer I can understand it can be problem of the interface you were using. Otherwise everything about your story is good. I liked the positive aspects of the story and Romance is my favourite genre.

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Thanks for the feedback . And I will try to re read the chapters to check any grammatical errors. 😁📖

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Here is the author’s review. I am dropping this review because I wanted to answer a few questions of our new readers who are here to look at this novel. Right now, the novel has 679 chapters to it, so you can be assured because I have incorporated almost everything that you might be wondering about. Q. Is this is an original novel or a translation like other Chinese novels on webnovel? Ans. This is an original story written by an Indian author who is just using the Chinese characters for this novel. Why? Because I like it. Q. Is it a cliche transmigration novel like others? Ans. It is cliche at some points. In starting you might find it similar to other transmigration novels you have read since that is how the story begins with. However, this is not your typical transmigration novel. The differentiating point is, unlike other novels, this one has two-sided transmigration. Just as the synopsis talks about, it has a two-sided transmigration story which tells the story of both are FLs. It means, there are two female leads where you get to read not only the modern times story but the ancient one as well. Q. How many chapters will this novel have? Ans. Right now we are already near 700 chapters. Even though I am planning to end it with 1000 chapters, however, if the story demanded, it might take a few more chapters. However, don’t worry, it’s not going to be a ridiculously long story. It might take some more chapters since I don’t want to end this work with a hasty ending. After all, the ending of the novel should be a satisfactory one. Q. Does this novel have grammatical issues? Ans. Of course. Every novel has, this might have some more. Since this was my first novel, I was kinda lost and inexperienced in writing at that time. The writing style might not suit your taste and to warn you, the starting chapters have a lot of grammatical mistakes. However, I think it’s enough to give you an outlook on the story. I want to edit those chapters but can’t do that anytime soon. So if your main focus is a fun story rather than grammar, then you can give it a try. However, if you can’t stand the poor grammar, then you can leave it. But I can promise you, with the later chapters, the mistakes become lesser and writing becomes better. If you can’t read this one due to poor grammar, you can look at my other novel, My Evil Genius Wife which has a similar yet different transmigration story. (Pinging the other novel as well) Q. What is the update schedule? Ans. The update has been changed to 1 chapter a day and there will be no update on Tuesday. The mass releases will be given at the author’s choice. Also, the update schedule can be changed due to any reason, but it will be notified through the Instagram page. So follow me on Instagram to know any change in the update schedule. Kamlyn_love. Q. Are Male lead’s a scumbag? Ans. Hmm..without spoiling you further, let me tell you that you are gonna love both of the MLs. You might not feel so at the start but as the story progresses, you will fall in love with them. Just read and you will know what I am saying. Q. Why two-sided transmigration? Ans. I choose to write this story because we have so many one-sided transmigration stories. One girl takes over another girl’s body and starts living like her. But what happened to the owner of that body? Does she always have to die? I don’t think so. You will get to see the other female lead’s story from volume 2nd, probably chapter 74. So if you are thinking of dropping it, just read that part first and I am sure you won’t be able to drop it. Keke. ( kinda proud of Xie Ming, you know.) Q. Does it have showbiz? Ans. It does. For our female lead in modern times, you will get to see her showbiz experience. However, it will remain as experience only. Her medical skills will be part of her whole journey and in later chapters, you will get to see more of it. Q. Do you hate white lotuses? Ans. Well, I do hate them. However, you will get to see them frequently and it just makes the whole story more fun. You can hate them all you want, but don’t hate the story because of it. Q. Is this novel privileged? Ans. Yes. Right now, it only has 1st tier which costs only 1 coin and you will get to read two advanced chapters in exchange for that. However, I request you to read all the instructions of privilege before buying to avoid any confusion later. Also, privilege means unlocking the chapters in advance which costs extra coins. However, the premium chapters will be updated at the same pace and can be unlocked by coins or fast passes. I tried to fill all the questions I could think of. If you have any more, you can ask in the replies. Also, for our new readers, don’t be afraid of reading the first few chapters because of grammar, if you get through this grammatical storm, you will get to read the interesting and mysterious journey of our female leads, who will make you laugh and cry at the same time. Don’t hesitate, just read.

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