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Fataki
FatakiLv55yr
2019-11-02 17:38

I am surprised to see this many favorables reviews. the mc is supposed to be a man more than a thousand year old but when he reincarnated he started to act like a teenager and the only thing he's good at is keep repeating " I'm the best " . The story is like every other Chinese novel , there's the weird little sister with unknown origins who has a particular constitution , the arrogant young nobles and the idiot mc . The writing quality is also bad , there's many grammatical errors and some forgotten words and letters.

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Simple_Dynasty
Simple_DynastyAuthor

Duly noted, well, I doubt you're gonna continue reading it, but the issue about arrogant young nobles only appeared early on and as for MC's intelligence, it shines in the later chapters. Well, as for the grammar, I can't justify that and will just accept your criticism, tho I am starting its editing. Thanks for actually taking the time to point out the flaws of the story, good day :)

Fataki
FatakiLv5

Hello , I'm not asking for a smart mc but if possible don't make the mc do stupid things so that you can advance with some of your ideas it's what make the story seems a little bit forced, and I hope that since the mc love to act like a normal person like the normal clothes he wear, can he stop thinking so arrogantly, even if he lived for thousands of years it didn't help when he was about to die and lost his hand usually it's that kind of arrogance that kill it's owner. I just deleted the story from my library but I will pick it up again.

Simple_Dynasty:Duly noted, well, I doubt you're gonna continue reading it, but the issue about arrogant young nobles only appeared early on and as for MC's intelligence, it shines in the later chapters. Well, as for the grammar, I can't justify that and will just accept your criticism, tho I am starting its editing. Thanks for actually taking the time to point out the flaws of the story, good day :)
Simple_Dynasty
Simple_DynastyAuthor

yeah, and although it is in the later chaps, the arrogance he had is lessening, and is acting carefully and only acts recklessly if he can and need to do so. Of course, he still takes risks but I tried making it reasonable.

Fataki:Hello , I'm not asking for a smart mc but if possible don't make the mc do stupid things so that you can advance with some of your ideas it's what make the story seems a little bit forced, and I hope that since the mc love to act like a normal person like the normal clothes he wear, can he stop thinking so arrogantly, even if he lived for thousands of years it didn't help when he was about to die and lost his hand usually it's that kind of arrogance that kill it's owner. I just deleted the story from my library but I will pick it up again.
ba_g2da_b
ba_g2da_bLv4

This is also what surprised me. You just perfectly summed up this novel

boov
boovLv5

Just a thought....Instead of mc being stupid ...why not his enemies be smart....smarter than the mc..almost all authors cant put brains into the enemies of their MCs...i guess that would be alot of work tryin to figure out complicated scenarios....but in the end 1 good novel=1000****ty ones πŸ˜‚

PutMyButtInABook
PutMyButtInABookLv13

I see where ur coming from but im more of in the good side of this novel πŸ€·πŸ½β€β™€οΈπŸ˜‚

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