Item: WTF I am in the Marvel Universe !
Rating: 1

MySoupotamiaLv44yr

2020-05-29 23:21

Honestly you couldve just said that the MC has a girlish voice in the beginning but instead you have to constantly write it down and it frankly got annoying. The characters arent bad per say but they feel odd if I do say so myself. I personally dont like the pacing since sometimes it makes me confused

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe !

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