I actually find this novel to be pretty good but I refuse to give a higher rating because the author has a serious fetish for traps... I honestly don't know if the MC is a man or a woman anymore, it's super weird man.

Stop with the girlish voice ND make it atleast childish voice or something.. it's irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating irritating!!!

I liked the beginning of the story but the MC status isn’t clear. I don’t know is he’s strong or weak , smart or stupid. It’s unclear, he’s basically afraid of a normal human, no matter how strong a human can be he’s still a human do I don’t get it. Making S.H.I.E.L.D overpowerd without a basis or reasons is also weird. I don’t know but i think you could’ve done better if you wanted to make Marvel universe on Hell mode. The MC character is a bit weird. On the other hand, your story has some very funny material that i really enjoyed. Keep it up and Good luck

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Terrible writing constant use of girlish voice. Idiotic reasoning. This book should be banned it is terrible you are a disgrace to marvel and its art. No offense

The story is good but what is wrong with mc not growing up even tho hi is immortal does not mean he have to be a child or act like a child even after living for about 30 years.

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This pedophilia crap disgusting. Seriously if your into homosexuality then just be upfront with your preferences. Gender bending traps voice of little girl WTF this dude 37 and someone asking if it's a child. Your one sick pedophile freak please have a horrible life.

If you are a fan of marvel then after 2 chapter you will question WTF am I reading? mc using Buddhist power to go on evil path, that's just dumb, you can't wield that power if you are using it for evil. Dumbest ancient one and that information about kidnapping in Nepal at airport is just bad. I get it's a fan fiction bt still that information someone will take seriously. And I am only describing these actions happened in 5 chapters. It was enough for me to guess that author is writing this for getting experience and not taking this whole situation seriously.