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LimaBean
LimaBeanLv45yr
2019-10-05 08:20

The story is amazing and well written. Its a new take of reverse transmigration in the apocalypse, I know another novel with a similar premise, but both are very different and good in their own ways. MC's family is just so SWEET. Like I would die for them. The MC is nice too as he is relatable and his care for his family is really shown. I guess the only problem I have is the ML. Like, most novels would start with a sweet ML and then have him blacken later. But the ML, umm "consensual" sexual activities through threats of breaking off an engagement, stringing along a girl, and not even breaking off the engagement when he found his "true" love. Personally, it's disgusting, by human standards. And the MC (from where I am) sort of looks down on the original for not telling his sister, but then HE doesn't tell his sister. The MC and ML are a frustrating to me. The sister, well I'm more interested in her story while reading this, I even skipped chapters to read her backstory. Other than the MC and ML, the story overall is very good. Thank you for writing!

To Rise Again in the Apocalypse [BL]

Lin_XiaoLong
4.7
139 Chs

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Lin_XiaoLong
Lin_XiaoLongAuthor

Thank you! I understand that you found the MC and ML frustrating at the moment. I am still trying to flesh them out slowly. Though it's about 40+ chapter here, in actuality, it's only up to chapter 15 in my files. I only cut them to around 1k words because I felt that readers would prefer such chapters with how human's attention span is getting lower nowadays XD Anyway, thank you again! Hope you'll continue to enjoy it!

5yr
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LimaBean
LimaBeanLv4

No, I totally can tell that if I were to read this maybe a few months later where there's more chapters, I don't think I'd ever let go of the novel. But, I'm just gonna hang out till there's more chapters as to see how the story develops. Keep writing, I'm actually quite optimistic about ur work!

5yr
2
ravhianyza
ravhianyzaLv6

Hello if xue hui is the ML pls let him be the ML untill its ending.. I love how his tom and jerry shows with the MC...although. We gave defferint points of view..

Lin_XiaoLong:Thank you! I understand that you found the MC and ML frustrating at the moment. I am still trying to flesh them out slowly. Though it's about 40+ chapter here, in actuality, it's only up to chapter 15 in my files. I only cut them to around 1k words because I felt that readers would prefer such chapters with how human's attention span is getting lower nowadays XD Anyway, thank you again! Hope you'll continue to enjoy it!
4yr
GodEndra
GodEndraLv3

Read to chapter 61. It will change your mind. Also, who you think is the ML isn't the ML at all. Author tricked us.

4yr
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LimaBean
LimaBeanLv4

Ur comment has been really tempting... can you... spoil?

GodEndra:Read to chapter 61. It will change your mind. Also, who you think is the ML isn't the ML at all. Author tricked us.
4yr
GodEndra
GodEndraLv3

I don't know how to use spoilers on here buut: Basically the original one we thought manipulated and raped him is part of 3 triplets. The one who actually slept with him was Xue Liang(the mafia/gangster one and a total scum), the one you know(the one who acts pitiful), and the eldest twin(who is a ML candidate). No ML has been decided yet but it is between MC's little adopted brother and the eldest twin(who is smart and didn't have any relations with MC. Eldest twin is winning in the votes. Starting at chapter 61 the plot twists keep coming. Won't say anything further but it is worth another read. Note: Xue Liang does get his ass kicked by MC

LimaBean:Ur comment has been really tempting... can you... spoil?
4yr
1
LimaBean
LimaBeanLv4

That is EXTREMELY tempting, I guess I will go back and reread it! Thanks for the spoilers

GodEndra:I don't know how to use spoilers on here buut: Basically the original one we thought manipulated and raped him is part of 3 triplets. The one who actually slept with him was Xue Liang(the mafia/gangster one and a total scum), the one you know(the one who acts pitiful), and the eldest twin(who is a ML candidate). No ML has been decided yet but it is between MC's little adopted brother and the eldest twin(who is smart and didn't have any relations with MC. Eldest twin is winning in the votes. Starting at chapter 61 the plot twists keep coming. Won't say anything further but it is worth another read. Note: Xue Liang does get his ass kicked by MC
4yr
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Amazing! Really amazing! This story has me captivated and hanging on its every words! The MC is great, the plot is great, the characters are great and the grammar and words are great! Really looking forward to the continuation of the chapters!

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Reveal spoiler

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There are spoilers here and i don't know how to hide them. Ok so, the writing and the background are good and the story it's interesting but, i just can't read anymore. I'll say it just as i wrote it in the comments: it feels as if i'm watching a rape victim forgive and fall in love with the criminal. Yes, i heard the real rapist was the brother of the guy and is a misunderstanding, but it's only found out until chapter 60 something? So you must pass all those chapters feeling like vomiting everytime the guy flirts and is shameless? Moreover, the MC who is a cultivator, somebody who must be at least a little smart after all those years... yet he feels bad for the guy and his gift, he allows this "scum" near his beloved sister and accepts his advances even though he despises him. And all this happens BEFORE knowing it was not him. Meaning, even if it was him it wouldn't matter, it would still be "ok". The fact that it was not him feels more like an excuse so they can be together without disgusting the readers. The other stinky shoe is the sister, she apparently knows about the future apocalipse, knows the guy (her fiance) doesn't love her but her brother (mc) and forgives it while "knowing" the guy is scum... It was alright because she told him to stay away from her family (because it seems the guy is also the reason of the death of her brother in the apocalipse) BUT, then she tells him to pretend to still be together to not worry the mc while he's hurt... If she's from the future she must know her brother is in a forced relationship, what part of seeing your rapist face can make you feel good? And if she knows about the guy not being the real rapist, why not tell your brother so he doesn't has to deal with it? She is like: i'm worried you'd feel worry for my relationship with your sexual predator so i'm bringing him home where he can harras you to prove you we are fine and you can rest easy and heal. I must say, i saw great potential in the author from how it was written, but the two major flaws in this story are: 1. The misunderstandings in a story are to make drama and keep you interested in it, not to make you feel grossed out for more than 50 chapters. This is a clear example of how not to make a misunderstanding in the plot. 2. The inconsistency in the characters, how if you say a character it's "this way" and then make them act as if they have no common sense inside their own character. If you love your family and they are the most important to you, you don't let scum take advantage of them or of you when you are perfectly aware of it without a fight (would you rather lie to your sister and hide her scum fiance actions knowing it'll be worse once she finds out? Instead of letting her cry and then move on you are betraying her and ruining her future if she doesn't find out before marrying. What makes you think a scum can make her happy the rest of her life when he is already cheating?) If you are a cultivator you are strong and must have good reflexes, no need to act delicate and unable to defend itselves (how is it the mc can't avoid the advances of the guy? Why are his abilities and IQ -0 when he is around?). And all the other major and minor examples of this mess that can only be explained by plot armor. I feel bitter writting this review because once you get these two things out of the way, the story is interesting and a good read. If you can ignore this sting in you eyes you may continue and enjoy it. On the other hand, the most bitter thing here are the comments of the people that are ok with the guy being a rapist and think it's valid in order to get the mc (even if it wasn't him, again, the mc didn't know). I just saw a few, but it felt so wrong to read those comments, especially the one with the meaning of "it's ok to be with a rapist, there are worst people out there". Just, be careful and don't believe everything you read.

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Kanachan_027
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This novel is great 😍 The main character is very special and I can't wait for him to settle with the male lead, his harem and friends. Life full of excited advantures during apocalypse.

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xiaoyibao
xiaoyibaoLv4

I hate this type of ML, once a scum I can't see him more than that even though it's just some kind of misunderstanding. I hate stupidity, so this is not really my cup of tea. But of course it is not like the overall quality is bad, only I can't read this anymore because i dislike the character design.

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not2complex
not2complexLv14

I have not checked this novel since last year and was so excited to see updates. This novel is one of my favorite "second chance apocalypse novels". I really hope to see more updates. The writing and plot are excellent!

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8oni
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:poking the author: Author-sama, are you still alive? Here, takes this 5 stars review from me as a bribe so you will update I need to know what happen next TAT

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Moonlightlad
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Why is that everytime i got hook it always have short chapter or slow update 😭😭 Pls i am just a notmal teenager finding happiness from my evil teachers who tortured me with so many modules/homeworks🤧🤧 Why are you also torturing me😭🤧 Kidding aside I Love your story btw but I'm serious about the updating stability

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