Review Detail of Sigheti in STORY NO LONGER EXIST

With an enthusiastic voice and an eye for detail, the author tells us the story of two unlikely lovers. We are introduced to a protagonist that is as lively as she is charming, a young woman with a youthful naivety about her. She becomes a sympathetic character as we get to know her better throughout the chapters. Sadly, as I was only able to read ten chapters, I was unable to completely grasp her full character. As for her love interest; I have not been able to fully comprehend his character either. It is truly a pity that there are only ten chapters out. Please note that the statements made below are by no means an attack on your work. Since I understand that he is to be depicted as a ‘bad boy’, I hope to share with you certain aspects that I find to be looked over in various other works. I believe the confused characterisation between a “popular bad boy” and an abuser is a mistake that is often made. Stereotypical bad boy: doesn't follow the rules because he thinks they are harmful or stifling. Outbursts are at points whenever the character believes there are injustices taking place; he fights to defend. Abuser: doesn't follow rules because he thinks he's above them. Outbursts are about things not going the way he wants them, fights to prove superiority or lay claim. Again, this is by no means commentary on your work: I simply hope to warn you when writing a character such as a ‘bad boy’. My sincere apologies if my warnings were uncalled for! Regarding the story: I believe it is off on a great start. The language is engaging and your grammar is very good. I have come to understand that the story has already been written and is now being translated into English. I wish you a lot of luck as it is probably quite a lot of work. The quality of your story is certainly above the average here on webnovel, and I’m happy to have encountered it. While romance is normally not my genre, I recognise a good work when I see one.