Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in Soul Evolution System

I like the story, but there are many things that irritate me. Protagonist didn’t spend a week in the new world before traveling to another world. So, limited world background that is then put behind. He should be able to do whatever he wants, but the system is basically telling him what to do with the missions. In the second world, he suddenly turned into an arrogant and shameless harem seeker, when the main purpose should have been gaining strength for a little while before leaving, not collecting women. Lack of forethought when he knows what’s going to happen, a system to help, and an intelligent girl that he had chosen for her intellect but spend his time giving instructions instead of telling her what he has in mind and asking her advice or alternatives. Her intelligence is half-wasted. Turned T.S from a pragmatic guy to a naive idealistic guy. The kind of guy that shouldn’t have gained that much influence in the first place. It feels like the author was jealous of guy instead of the protagonist. His daughter also fell too easily for him considering her character. Not a week had passed and there were already advanced mutations. The evolution is too fast for a change that is supposed to take at least half a century.