Writing quality is good and the grammar was decent. The plot worked out as well but what really made this disappointing is the attitude of the MC. He is like teflon; nothing sticks. No meaningful relationships, just pure indifference or some negative emotions which led to no character development and made the experience of reading this kinda dull.
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