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nitraM
nitraMLv44yr
2020-08-27 08:11

this is a place holder (I'll write a review after, since I think tha author deserves a good one(: ) (the cliff notes version is: writing quality:very good(makes me want to read more, author sometimes uses unusual words that make the book have a different personality update stability:1 chap every day(not accounting for tha rare occasion where the chapter understandably wouldn't write(malfunction, family,etc.) sometimes he even posts double chapters story development:great(this will be expanded in the complete version also spoilers (; ) character design:made interesting mainly by personality and their past(like:the main character is a regular Joe shmoe until you realise that he made a deal with a devil by making other people go to hell to work for him while fooling them into thinking that it's a game(it's not a evil as it sounds tho)) word background:(another place holder (and a metric tun of spoilers (that will make you say ... "huh,nice"))

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GD_Cruz
GD_CruzAuthor

thanks for the review, NitraM... and thanks for reminding me that Foolhardies is in dire need of a new chapter. :)

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