Review Detail of SimpleReaderPassin in Pokemon: Animus

Item: Pokemon: Animus
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

SimpleReaderPassinLv41yrSimpleReaderPassin

I was enjoying it until i couldnt understand some of the accents you kept on using which started to make the story completely confusing [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Pokemon: Animus

Docnox

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DocnoxAuthorDocnox

Accents? theres a parady scottish one in One scene. its based on the Sword and Shield memes but otherwise there aren’t any accents. Could ya explain a bit more, im always looking to improve the story.

1yr

SimpleReaderPassinLv4SimpleReaderPassin

From the part where he got hired. English is not my first or sec language soo i am having trouble with the way its written

Docnox:Accents? theres a parady scottish one in One scene. its based on the Sword and Shield memes but otherwise there aren’t any accents. Could ya explain a bit more, im always looking to improve the story.

1yr

DocnoxAuthorDocnox

Ah, I can see how the 1st person narrative style would mess with ya a bit.

1yr