- Very good quality (not your usual qidian novel) - Nice grammar - Really like your combat style. A little bit hard to read at first, but it is a nice addition. - Generous and nice MC. I usually prefer greedy MC, but I still like it. - I like that you used not common Pokemon! - About the nicknames... it makes sense that everyone would name their pokemon, but if every trainer you introducce has 2-6 named pokemon and they're fighting named pokemon... it gets confusing when you're not binge-reading the novel -Please, make an auxiliary chapter with your MC's pokemon nicknames, moves, natura and ability... and specially his companion's pokemon. Thank you for the novel and keep writing! :)
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