Review Detail of Qlix in illicit relationship
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I'm gonna start by saying I love the plot. Next I'm gonna mention, how I like the smut scenes. Then I'll mention the character design, because I love how the author mentions MC's past life at times and just the characters themselves. Also there's HAREM!! The author could use a bit more improvement on writing quality, since some parts have gotten really repetitive over time. But I've noticed he's improving slowly and I want him to know that it's noticable and makes the story more enjoyable. Thank you for listening to your readers' requests and trying! 😊 I've mentioned at chapter 40-something that if I like the story as much later on as I did back then, I'll get privileged and here I am - liking the story progress even more 😁 Keep it up and thank you for sharing your story with us 😊 I'm waitint on new release 😉
illicit relationship
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Oh! You have read up to the latest chapter? Yes, my English still sucks. I've been trying to improve my English but it seems like I only improved a little. English is so hard and has so many rules. Now, I only read novels that have good grammar, hoping that it will help me improve my English later. I was pleasantly surprised when I read your paragraph comments. I didn't expect you to still buy my priv even though there are only a few days left before the end of this month. thank you for reading. I hope you will keep reading my novel until it's finished
If youre in need of a proofreader you can hit me up. english is my first language and i can help you out with proofreading😂
Shooting_Star:Oh! You have read up to the latest chapter? Yes, my English still sucks. I've been trying to improve my English but it seems like I only improved a little. English is so hard and has so many rules. Now, I only read novels that have good grammar, hoping that it will help me improve my English later. I was pleasantly surprised when I read your paragraph comments. I didn't expect you to still buy my priv even though there are only a few days left before the end of this month. thank you for reading. I hope you will keep reading my novel until it's finished
Im broke bruh. 😭😭😭 but I will try my best to improve my English. hope you will read my novel till the end
PersonaJ:If youre in need of a proofreader you can hit me up. english is my first language and i can help you out with proofreading😂
Shooting_Star:Im broke bruh. 😭😭😭 but I will try my best to improve my English. hope you will read my novel till the end